Thursday, September 8, 2016

week 5: Colour Poem

Hi bloggers welcome black To other blog post
This blog Is about my colour poem Hope You Enjoy!

I am blogging this because I enjoyed doing it. When I knew that we were going to be doing it I thought YES I LOVE POEMS!

Colour Poem

WALT to use descriptive language to help create an image (picture) in our reader's head

Success Criteria
  • Use adjectives to describe the noun
  • Use adverbs to describe the verb (describe how the action is happening)
  • Use a range of verbs to explain what is happening
  • Use a range of nouns that help us identify with a colour


Black is the Colour of…….

  • A wicked witch zooming dangerously from castle to castle in search of potions
  • A lazy cat waiting patiently by the roaring fire for its night-time feed
  • A  majestic panther stalking its prey tactfully through the dense forest
  • A piece of licorice inviting me to sneak it from the brightly coloured box

Red is the colour of ……..

  • Slippery lipstick running down my face
  • A bright red Ferrari zooming fast in the race
  • Blood running down my foot, puddling on the ground
  • A rotten strawberry smelling like cheese
  • The sweet juicy raspberry dripping  from my mouth as I bite into it
  • A juicy watermelon inviting me to chomp on it
  • The courageous vampire biting into a man’s fresh skin squirting blood

White  is the color of

  • Boats
  • House
  • Car
  • Dog
  • Cat
  • Poo
  • We
  • Peel p45(car)

The colour White

  1. The White boat has made it across The White Antarctica loudly

  1. The White  peel p45 (car) that Jeremy Clarkson drove and has team top gear

  1. The White house has survived the cyclone Pam some people happily living thoue it.

  1. The White button made people happily live forever.

  1. The White dog  not living happily throw his life.

  1. The White cat not living happily throw its life.

The colour black

  1. Black Lamborghini loudly making its way across the
  2. Zorua making its way happily to its trainer
  3. Obsidian waiting happily to be mind.
  4. Lahahs  zooming down the volcano lazily.

1 comment:

  1. Cool Oscar
    I like how you did two poem
    it is very cool