Monday, June 20, 2016

Week 7: free choice writting

I am blogging this because I did it when I was sick, It was fun doing it.

I am learning to communicate my ideas effectively to the reader.

Free Choice Writing- Oscar J
Persuade, Entertain or Inform?
I am learning to communicate my ideas effectively to the reader.
You choose the topic and you choose the writing purpose. This needs to be your best independent writing for assessment. Below is the success criteria for quality writing. Use this criteria and go for it!

Success Criteria (Sentence formation has been our main focus)
Content & Ideas
Include a range of ideas with clear details.
Sentence Formation
  • Include simple, compound and complex sentences
  • Start most of my sentences with different words
Choose words and language features to meet my purpose.
Clear beginning, middle and end with paragraphs.
My best spelling with good attempts at words I don’t know.
Use all basic punctuation (capital letters, full stops, question marks and exclamation marks) correctly and attempt some complex punctuation.

( When I am older I am going to build my dream boat and the is what this writing is based on)

One day I was building my dream boat.

Suddenly, I had an fabulous idea for my fabulous dream boat.  

An indoor park with a picture of the sky and sun.

So I got right away to that fabulous project. While I was hammering away  I just got another idea.  I am going to build the number 1 biggest theatre in the world, on a boat. I got right away to that job.

I called over some work mates and we went right away to start the job.

One of them said “to the shed” and we set out the plan in the shed.

We finished the plan and then we set off to find the stuff that we needed, we went to about 50 shops.

We got lots of things, but most of mums money was gone out of the bank and into the shops cash registers mostly on beers for us to celebrate at the end of the day of hard work.

Soon we had got everything and we were ready to start.
So we got right away to that fabulous idea YES I HAVE NALED ONE NALE IN

That a noff for today come boy let's go home And get those beers chope a 6 doseon.

Gope Gope Gope Gope, that was a good 6 lots of beers Ok larr set me up with another one. Some thing with Wrong  I was so mad
“Oh No”


Thursday, June 9, 2016

Week 5: Workshop Prove It - writting

I am blogging the because it was fun at the workshop.

We are leaning about putting an apostrophe in and making a contraction

Workshop Prove It

I learnt how to put an apostrophe in and make a contraction

Here is an example: